Ive always been very critical about peoples music and figured one day I could be a music producer so here goes. I heard about 5 of your songs and many have lots of potential but there are several issues with them. They need more creativity with the drumming parts and guitar changes. I know you can't figure out what I"m saying unless I gave you an idea of what I hear and believe it needs. Again, they do have potential, lots but they do need more changes and sort of reminds me of the way Candlemass wrote their songs, long and droning without impactful changes. I hear dramatic parts in your songs that need to be emphasized and I sat expecting it but never came! It looks like your doing all the instruments? These days its hard to get a band going, I pursued it in the Hollywood 90's era and it was a whole world back then in the metal scene and how we went for the music and scene, nothing like today! You certainly have the image! Im looking into buying a 7x16 trailer to convert into a music studio and living situation and perhaps once day I will invite people to send me their works and give them input and even send ideas using my guitar and other FX I have so one can hear what exactly I"m hearing to better the song/s.
