Another future sloganyear song mix to critique

[Orvillain]

Would appreciate if y'all could tear this apart as much as necessary!

Ephysis_rc1.mp3

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[Alex Kenivel]

Excellent!

Personal notes, understanding that these may very well be artistic decisions and a matter of preference:

• Vocals seem buried especially in context with the drums, although I have a notion that this was on purpose for the more airy/atmospheric vibe.
• Drums sticking out in front of all other instruments. I like a nice in-your-face drum sound but instead of making them louder (not saying your just intentionally doing that) I like to add some subtle EQ and dirt to make them poke out, along with some side-chaining to bring the hits out when need be.

Perhaps reigning in the drums could make the vocals seem less buried, or even some more vocal ear candy to make them pop. Again, I don't know the scope of your musical vision so take all of this with a large syringe of salt as needed, twice daily.

 

[Orvillain]

I do sorta feel the drums aren't sitting right with this one actually. Good to hear it from another horses mouth hole.