Sounds killer to me, man!
Not trying to diminish the constructive critiques of the other guys, but ya really don’t gotta worry about the little EQ tweaks until you’ve got all the instruments sitting in a mix. You can take that same tone now, drop it into 50 different songs, find out it works perfectly for 30 of them and then need various tweaks to the remaining 20. It’s all contingent on what else is going on in the mix, right down to the tempo of the song.
This is precisely why any presets I use to record with are considered to be in a ‘liquid state’, they’re always going to change depending on the song. The core of the sound/feel will be there, but the stuff that makes them fit in a track can only be determined with everything else in place.