That Old Funker

[mchad]

 

[SwirlyMaple]

Awesome track, and the production on this is damn impressive too. Do you do this professionally? If not, you should

 

[Stone]

That was great thank you for sharing , Superb Production

 

[mchad]

Thanks for the positive vibes. It's a solid effort I think...maybe a B+? Not sure.

As a side bit of info I sent the track to a producer for feedback. He liked it and suggested:
- lifting the chorus with some harmonies
- adding a little guitar this or that to the 2nd and 3rd verse to build the journey
- look to edit down the middle 8 to lessen the repetition a bit (I tend to agree somewhat with this as I try to avoid outstaying welcomes)
- intensify the last chorus from a vocal perspective
- he liked the last chord (an Emaj7 I think it was)

I do like the lyrics. The first time I've told a story. Inspired by "Roxanne" and "Every Breath You Take".

Current track I'm working on is grunge city. It's all downstrokes which is not my usual mode but what the heck...there something primal about 8ths on the downstroke!

 

[mchad]

Final version.

Took on board what the producer mentioned and got some BV's done. And added bits. And took bits away. It'll have to do.

 

[Alex Kenivel]

Outstanding!

 

[SwirlyMaple]

Final version.

Took on board what the producer mentioned and got some BV's done. And added bits. And took bits away. It'll have to do.

Awesome work! I love it.

 

[Sascha Franck]

Great tune, great production!